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A splash squared up against my right ear and I recoiled. ``Eee!'' I looked over at the source and found a girl roughly the age of my own kids. She must have just jumped in.
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A playful look held on her face asking a simple question: *May I join you?*
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A playful look held on her face asking a simple question: \emph{May I join you?}
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My boys mounted a rescue operation and coordinated a splash of their own at her in response. I was fairly certain I could defend myself against a small child, but who could deny them the fun of splashing and squealing they got out of it?
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@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ I had barely managed to secure the restroom door when the first shot rang out.
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All three of the children clapsed their ears tight.
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All I could think about was that it *wasn't* our girl's sniper. My heart sank knowing she had probably just lost whatever fight was going on outside.
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All I could think about was that it \emph{wasn't} our girl's sniper. My heart sank knowing she had probably just lost whatever fight was going on outside.
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Thankfully the gunfire was swapped out for some shouting, which meant no pew-pew for the time being. I couldn't make out what was being yelled, but it was clearly voices. First a husky male, then...
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I sighed as deep as I could. I looked at the three of them cowering furthest from the door.
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Idiots! Two inches of wood's not gonna-
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Two inches of wood's not gonna do much to protect them.
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No, Elaine, they're *children.* *Children* have no *reason* to know positional warfare.
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But they're children. Children have no reason to know even the first thing about positional warfare.
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My boys were looking up to me, awaiting orders.
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I threw my thumb to the corner next to the door, trusting 10 inches of brick over 2 inches of useless.
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Course, if their sniper carried .50 cal it wouldn't matter. What really irked me was that it *didn't* matter what he packed; the door move was STILL best.
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Course, if their sniper carried .50 cal it wouldn't matter. What really irked me was that it \emph{didn't} matter what he packed; the door move was STILL best.
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Game theory was a bitch.
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@ -148,7 +148,7 @@ The room shook and my ear probably bled, hell, they both did. Did I forget to me
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And lo and behold, the SWAT SQUAD stopped SWATTing and stood there like their turns got skipped.
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Apparently Miss Lifeguard knew what an attack of opportunity was because now the sniper that I DEFINITELY wasn't crushing on turned into a blood splatter, as opposed to the sniper that I merely *totally* wasn't crushing on.
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Apparently Miss Lifeguard knew what an attack of opportunity was because now the sniper that I DEFINITELY wasn't crushing on turned into a blood splatter, as opposed to the sniper that I merely \emph{totally} wasn't crushing on.
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Which was awesome and all, but now shit got real.
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Then the reliefs on the wall started glowing. The more I took them in, the more they were speaking to me. In my minds eye, I saw each of them as Legendary weapons. The one that really stuck out was, obviously, the sword.
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The sword was a beautiful thing, unmistakably divine in origin. Only one sword like it in existence... two if you count Excalibur but this was the other one. *This* was Caliburn, better known as the Sword in the Stone. Ironic, since it was in a pool, and the sword that comes out of the water was *not* Caliburn.
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The sword was a beautiful thing, unmistakably divine in origin. Only one sword like it in existence... two if you count Excalibur but this was the other one. \emph{This} was Caliburn, better known as the Sword in the Stone. Ironic, since it was in a pool, and the sword that comes out of the water was \emph{not} Caliburn.
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It was all crystal clear. An Arthurian tale unfolded before my eyes.
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At least Caliburn floated before me. It looked so real I had to reach for it, despite the massive hallucinations I should be feeling from having my leg shot off.
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And because nothing else in my day went as planned, the sword was real. As in, I wrapped my hand around it and felt *resistance* and *weight*.
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And because nothing else in my day went as planned, the sword was real. As in, I wrapped my hand around it and felt \emph{resistance} and \emph{weight}.
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I had torn a sword out of the fabric of the universe. A legendary sword. \emph{The} Legendary Sword. No not *that* Legendary Sword, the other one.
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I had torn a sword out of the fabric of the universe. A legendary sword. \emph{The} Legendary Sword. No not \emph{that} Legendary Sword, the other one.
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The world returned to me. Okay, logically I knew it to be the other way around, but you try telling that to a girl who just got her leg back by sheer fucking magic.
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I did.
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I closed the distance in a second, speaking with a fuller voice than I should have had. ``I am Elaine, Protector of The Sword and mother of two. Fear my wrath.'' I plunged the sword into his chest, *then* admired just how cool that just was.
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I closed the distance in a second, speaking with a fuller voice than I should have had. ``I am Elaine, Protector of The Sword and mother of two. Fear my wrath.'' I plunged the sword into his chest, \emph{then} admired just how cool that was.
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Next up, did I still have children?
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